Rose ([info]pitchblackrose) wrote,
@ 2005-12-04 02:37:00
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Ficlet: Lovingly Led Astray. Not fanfic, but rather a fandom fic.
So, the following ficlet doesn't have ANY connections to RL at all, and any likeness to reality is a pure coincidence... Er, I'd also like to mention that I have a very healthy and happy relationship with my husband.

*runs and hides*



Title: Lovingly Led Astray
Pairing: [info]son_of_darkness/[info]naughtyhouseelf. And there's also, eh, a mystery female in a non sexual role :p
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: ~900
Notes: This is all [info]balefully's fault

She blew out a long stream of smoke, crossed her legs and grinned.

They were both standing in front of her, staring resolutely at the floor. The blond, her pet, seemed just vaguely uncomfortable, but the dark haired boy’s cheeks were glowing.

They certainly hadn’t been this shy the last time they’d met. Maybe it had been the alcohol, although she doubted it. Her pet had been whispering frantically in her ear about the younger boy as soon as he’d laid eyes on him.

But now, the smaller boy seemed on the verge of bolting. He had responded eagerly enough to the suggestion that he’d come to visit, but now he was biting his lip, wiggling his toes and clenching his hands all at once, probably thinking that no one would notice. Her pet was thankfully immobile.

“Darling? Would you be so kind to relieve our guest of his jumper? He does seem rather flushed.” She took another long drag of her cigarette and smiled encouragingly at them.

The blond immediately turned to face the smaller boy, but hesitated before touching him. He then raised his hand to the other boy’s cheek and trailed his fingers over the pale skin. The youth leaned eagerly into the touch, seemingly thankful for the small kindness. The man didn’t linger, but rather set to obey her orders.

The boy immediately stiffened at the assault, but he didn’t voice any objections as his jumper was dragged over his head and discarded to a chair. He seemed oddly fragile in his white shirt with his arms wrapped around himself, staring worriedly at the other man.

The blond, meanwhile, seemed already beside himself with excitement. His eyes swept greedily over the youth’s body, seeming to appreciate the snug fitting trousers and the loose shirt. The boy was blushing even more, but eyeing his companion with curiosity.

They both started when the woman spoke again.

“Good.” She took a final drag of her cigarette and discarded it into a nearby ashtray. “Now, pet... Do try to make our guest a little more comfortable.” She smirked. “I believe that he will be more amusing to me if he’s a little more relaxed.”

Her pet seemed a bit nervous as he approached the visitor. He held eye contact as he carefully extracted one hand towards him and placed it on his waist. The boy jerked at the contact, but remained standing where he was, staring wide-eyed at the other man. The blond edged closer still, stopping only when he was close enough to smell the smaller boy’s fine, dark hair. He closed his eyes and inhaled deeply. As he exhaled he slowly opened his eyes and smiled happily down at the boy. The boy looked up and carefully returned the smile. Suddenly the small distance between them was closed and their lips met with delighted desperation.

The woman smiled to herself as the two men quickly deepened the kiss, sucking greedily on each other’s lips. She could see how the teenager melted against the older man, all tension leaving his shoulders. They were touching each other everywhere they could reach, greedily sucking, licking and nipping at each other as they went. Her pet’s hands seemed to have settled upon the boy’s behind, kneading the flesh clumsily but with great enthusiasm. Meanwhile, the boy’s hands were fluttering across the other man’s chest, flirting idly with his shirt buttons without daring to undo them.

They were grinding against each other now, looking flushed and eager. They eagerly extracted moans, shivers and gasps from each other, taking delight in every reaction. Their eyes were closed; they seemed lost to the world.

“Now, now.” She licked her lips. “Let’s not be greedy, boys.”

They parted quickly at her words, and the smaller boy blushed again. He really was sweet, she thought.

“No, there’s no need to stop, but then again, there’s no need to come in our trousers, is there?” She raised an eyebrow. They squirmed under her gaze, not daring to meet it, and obviously hoping that they’d be allowed to resume their activities as soon as possible. She smiled. ”But by all means, carry on, boys. You should even get rid of some of the clothing.” She smiled at the way the younger man’s hands twitched at these words. “But a little less frotting for now, all right?”

She was sure that they’d both nodded, even though she hadn’t been able to actually see it in their rush to peel their shirts of each other. Laboured moans escaped them both as they embraced awkwardly, desperate to feel as much of each other’s skin as possible. Blunt nails clung to white skin, marking it with delightful ease.

They were kissing again, messily and brutally. The woman couldn’t tell whose breath it was that was shaking, but they both seemed utterly blissful and content. And very, very aroused, even though both of them were making valiant attempts at stilling their hips.

The woman adjusted her leather skirt slightly, feeling delightfully unsettled as she watched the proceedings. She fished another long, white cigarette from a packet and raised it to her lips.

And suddenly, for the first time that evening, the visitor broke his silence. “Bite me,” he panted against his lover’s skin. “Please.”

And as the woman nodded her consent to her pet’s enquiring glance, she concluded that the evening’s entertainment looked very promising indeed.

She lit the cigarette and smiled.


~~~


OMG. I cannot believe that I just wrote that. And before you ask, no, it couldn't be more graphic. As I was wibbling over writing this I realised that I've never even touched [info]son_of_darkness, not even shaken his hand. In light of that I decided that I wasn't about to bare his arse or describe his throbbing manhood on my LJ :p



ETA: [info]lizardspots has lovingly illustrated this bastard of a fic here. Go look!!



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[info]balefully
2005-12-03 06:42 pm UTC (link)
!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111132wretsrdfdh

I AM INCOHERENT. COMPLETELY AND TOTALLY INCOHERENT. OH, THE LOVE I FEEL FOR YOU KNOWS NO BOUNDS.

*GOES OFF TO HAVE SOME ALONE TIME*

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-03 06:53 pm UTC (link)
*snorts*

When they come to take me away, I'll be blaming you, okay?!

Thanks for the rec, hun :* :)

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(no subject) - [info]balefully, 2005-12-03 06:54 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]pitchblackrose, 2005-12-03 08:30 pm UTC

[info]fidgetknickers
2005-12-03 06:49 pm UTC (link)
HOLY FUCK.

And how the hell am I supposed to live up to that, hmm?! I was imagining you saying all the dialogue and I was quivering, I swear.

“Bite me,” he panted against his lover’s skin. “Please.”

That? Had me squealing.

Guh.

*licks*

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-03 06:54 pm UTC (link)
Glad you like it, dear :) The "bite me" part was actually inspired by last night's t00b meeting where it seemed like everyone was comparing bite marks, and that they were all from Kye :p

*licks back*

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(no subject) - [info]balefully, 2005-12-03 06:55 pm UTC

[info]son_of_darkness
2005-12-03 06:49 pm UTC (link)
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

I LOVE IT OMG!!! I WAS ALL TENSE ALL THE WAY THROUGH IT, ON THE EDGE OF MY CHAIR, ALL TREMBLY AND BITING MY FINGERS BECAUSE OMG IT IS MEEEE!!! ZOMG!!! I AM STILL SHAKING A BIT BECAUSE IT IS SO HOT AND I LOVE IT SO MUCH AND OMG I WANT TO PRINT IT OUT AND KEEP IT UNDER MY PILLOW!!! AND I AM SOOOOO TOTALLY GOING TO SNOG YOUR FACE OFF AT THE NEXT OTTO!!! *DANCES AROUND GLEEFULLY AND EXPLODES AND LOVES AND OMG*
xxxxxxx

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-03 06:56 pm UTC (link)
*blushes until she's purple*

It was very disturbing to write - it's even more disturbing to know that you've read it... *wibbles*

But thank you for the cap-locks! *adores* :)

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[info]lizardspots
2005-12-03 06:54 pm UTC (link)
OH MY FUCKING GODDDDD I AM LAUGHING SO HARD, YOU ROCK IN SO MANY DIFFERENT WAYS. *is very very dead ahahahahah*

This is terribly hot. Omg. Real life RPS. Gahahaha. Now, I say [info]son_of_darkness and [info]naughtyhouseelf (and the mysterious blonde) act this out!

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-03 06:58 pm UTC (link)
Er, right. *bursts out laughing at the absurdity of it all, once again*

I blame Lucy, you know ;)

But thank you *beams*

And it never said that the mystery woman was blonde! She might be anyone!!!

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(no subject) - [info]lizardspots, 2005-12-04 05:39 am UTC

[info]joosetta
2005-12-03 06:56 pm UTC (link)
THAT WAS THE HOTTEST THING EVER.I HAD NO IDEA HOW I WOULD REACT-and I loooooveditomg.

Just so perfect and skdfhgskfdhaskhferhgergka';dsa;fa'kdsgf

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-03 06:59 pm UTC (link)
You really are the sweetest thing EVER *adores* Thank you :)

And yes, RL RPS tends to make one react in an upredictable manner, doesn't it? *is still a bit amazed at self*

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(no subject) - [info]joosetta, 2005-12-03 07:10 pm UTC

[info]jamie2109
2005-12-03 06:57 pm UTC (link)
Mmmm watching two sexy boys and those two sexy boys must be very *ahem* arousing indeed if they're doing that! Yummy. Makes me wish I had been there in person to see it. Oh right, never happened. *nods*

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-03 07:02 pm UTC (link)
Hehe, they are very inspiring ;)

Glad you liked it ;)

And if we ever act it out I promise to post pictures

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[info]gmth
2005-12-03 06:58 pm UTC (link)
Hee! That was fun. Now I really wish I wasn't on the other side of the ocean. :-)

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-03 07:03 pm UTC (link)
Yet another reason to spend your next vacation in London ;)

Glad you got a giggle out of it :) And I really like the santa!philosopher's stone!

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(no subject) - [info]annephoenix, 2005-12-04 12:11 pm UTC

[info]petulans
2005-12-03 06:59 pm UTC (link)
Damn, both seriously hot and seriously sweet at the same time - that takes serious skill!

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-03 07:04 pm UTC (link)
Thank you! *beams*

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[info]fatale
2005-12-03 07:02 pm UTC (link)
I mean, are you all not just the hottest LJ threesome around?

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-03 07:05 pm UTC (link)
Why, yes, I'm starting to believe that we are ;) I've never ever recieved so many comments in such a short amount of time :p

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[info]shabzilla
2005-12-03 07:40 pm UTC (link)
*AGREES WITH WHOEVER MENTIONED THE BITING OMG*

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:0000!11

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-03 08:19 pm UTC (link)
:D :D Biting is really the hottest thing ever ;)

Thanks for reading!

(BTW, aren't you one of the London T00bs? I feel like people are always mentioning you and yet I've never met you... *waves hi* :) )

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(no subject) - [info]shabzilla, 2005-12-04 08:51 am UTC
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(no subject) - [info]shabzilla, 2005-12-04 11:45 am UTC

[info]monzz
2005-12-03 08:03 pm UTC (link)
OMG

Just... muhandhuuuhhjgje...

Kye (son_of_darkness) recced RPS... but I didn't think it would be so...

*coughs* You don't get wet from PG-13 stories. It's an unwritten rule. <_<

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-03 08:20 pm UTC (link)
You don't get wet from PG-13 stories. It's an unwritten rule.

Awww... This is all very odd, but this is one of the nicest comments I've ever recieved :D Thank you! *mwah*

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(no subject) - [info]monzz, 2005-12-03 10:16 pm UTC

[info]starcrossedgirl
2005-12-04 05:55 am UTC (link)
ajsgujbkjhakh! OMGyes! That was just far too hot, and the biting, oh my fucking God, and just GUH!

I DEMAND now that you write Dunya/Heike! Or Dunya/Heike/Elanor if you prefer that! Come on! We need some hot RPfemmeslash!

*falls over dead*

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-04 06:30 am UTC (link)
Gah! I shall be a fandom outcast, known as the crazy woman who keeps writing pr0n about herself!!! :I

And do you require some mouth-to-mouth, dear? ;)

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(no subject) - [info]starcrossedgirl, 2005-12-04 07:53 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]pitchblackrose, 2005-12-04 09:57 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]starcrossedgirl, 2005-12-04 10:05 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]annephoenix, 2005-12-04 12:11 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]starcrossedgirl, 2005-12-04 02:35 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]dramaphile, 2005-12-08 05:17 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]wildfyre, 2005-12-05 12:26 pm UTC

[info]czeri
2005-12-04 06:42 am UTC (link)
Hmm, not really my pairing, but you still managed to make it highly enjoyable to read. And I do mean highly ;-) I've never even suspected that RPS could be this much fun :-)

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-04 06:44 am UTC (link)
*giggles*

By 'not your pairing', you mean that there are no Malfoys involved, right? ;)

Thanks for reading - had I been in your place I'm not sure I'd have dared click the link! :)

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(no subject) - [info]czeri, 2005-12-04 06:59 am UTC

[info]morganwolfe666
2005-12-04 07:14 am UTC (link)
0.0

*dead*

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-04 09:53 am UTC (link)
Er... Sorry? ;)

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(no subject) - [info]morganwolfe666, 2005-12-04 10:27 am UTC

[info]ex_ms_katoni171
2005-12-04 09:04 am UTC (link)
That is seriously hot! Kye is OMG SO CUTE and so thoroughly biteable! And [info]naughtyhouseelf is just... wow.

Excellent work!

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-04 09:54 am UTC (link)
*giggles*

I still CANNOT believe that I wrote this...

Glad you liked it :)

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[info]lazy_daze
2005-12-04 09:52 am UTC (link)
lajshkjgfgvfgOMG this is BEZT EVARS. Ahaahahahah OMG YOU WIN. WHY MUST I MISS OUT ON ALL THIS AS IT GETS POSTED. WOES, ETC. *loves madly and messily*

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-04 09:55 am UTC (link)
Yes, where were you last night when everyone was drunk and sleepy and caps-locksy?! *frowns at you*

*loves you sloppily*

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(no subject) - [info]lazy_daze, 2005-12-04 09:59 am UTC
(no subject) - [info]pitchblackrose, 2005-12-04 10:04 am UTC

[info]lizardspots
2005-12-04 11:53 am UTC (link)
http://www.livejournal.com/users/lizardspots/156402.html

...um. Hahaha.

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-04 01:46 pm UTC (link)
I have actually already framed it - and am staring at it now, from my bed ;)

Will buy a proper frame tomorrow, but OMGORGASM :D

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[info]underlucius
2005-12-04 01:05 pm UTC (link)
you bad bad bad girl...

*licks*

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-04 01:55 pm UTC (link)
Gah... Yes, yes I am. *hangs head*

But I feel a little bit better about my awful naughtyness since it inspired Lizard's art ;)

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(no subject) - [info]pitchblackrose, 2005-12-04 01:55 pm UTC

[info]purple_avocado
2005-12-04 03:44 pm UTC (link)
I can't think of a way to respond to this. ^___^ I had just to myself, "I'll go explore some of those London people" and this is what I read.

Ahahahaa.

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[info]purple_avocado
2005-12-04 03:47 pm UTC (link)
Add a 'said' in there. I think faster than I type.

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(no subject) - [info]pitchblackrose, 2005-12-04 04:08 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]purple_avocado, 2005-12-08 02:46 pm UTC

[info]danxsunday
2005-12-04 04:32 pm UTC (link)
I am not sure whether to be completely freaked out or thoroughly turned on. SO i shall go for a happy mix of both ;)

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-04 04:35 pm UTC (link)
*snorts*

You and me both, Dan, you and me both ;)

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(no subject) - [info]danxsunday, 2005-12-04 04:41 pm UTC

[info]wildfyre
2005-12-05 12:29 pm UTC (link)
ZOMG!! THAT WAS SO HOT!!! And I totally want to jump that anonymous female...

You have to write more t00b RPS! Maybe we'll even get a category on Skyehawke :-p

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[info]pitchblackrose
2005-12-05 01:40 pm UTC (link)
:D Glad you liked it!

But omg, more t00b RPS? With six boobs in total?! *faints*

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[info]wearethestars
2006-01-07 02:20 am UTC (link)
I never commented on this, but you deserve to know that I read it, and I enjoyed it, and I felt very pervy for reading it... *wink*

I think I didn't comment because I had just recently friended you and was still lurking. (so so sorry)

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[info]islandsmoke
2007-10-30 04:03 pm UTC (link)
OMG! Real person slash shouldn't be so hot. Not when I know (sort of) one of the people. Personalities aside - this is great.

(Found this through the link on Lizard's art.)

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